I like the images of your family. But I was kind of wondering what it would be like make your photos a little theatrical. For example the images of the kids especially with the one close up with rosy cheeks and red lips. What came to my mind with her is a sugarplum fairy ;-) You make a photo essay of the Night Before Christmas perhaps.
I like the image where the girl is sitting on the relatives' lap, how they are looking at each other. Overall I like how you showed the family and the kids being kids.
I really liked how you focused on the kids, since the holidays really focus on pleasing children. The children made the photos funny and interesting to view.
The pictures of the children are really funny. My cousins act like that in front of the camera too. These pictures really capture the energy and excitement of the holidays.
I have to wonder why these kids and what is the story being reveled by them. There is no clear introduction to the essay, leaving with a series of cute kid pictures. Revisit your images and try to pull a little more depth from them.
I like the images of your family. But I was kind of wondering what it would be like make your photos a little theatrical. For example the images of the kids especially with the one close up with rosy cheeks and red lips. What came to my mind with her is a sugarplum fairy ;-) You make a photo essay of the Night Before Christmas perhaps.
ReplyDeleteI like the image where the girl is sitting on the relatives' lap, how they are looking at each other. Overall I like how you showed the family and the kids being kids.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you focused on the kids, since the holidays really focus on pleasing children. The children made the photos funny and interesting to view.
ReplyDeleteThe one with the little boy looking at the camera while hanging on to the chair is great because it looks like he is a little restless.
ReplyDeleteThe pictures of the children are really funny. My cousins act like that in front of the camera too. These pictures really capture the energy and excitement of the holidays.
ReplyDeleteI have to wonder why these kids and what is the story being reveled by them. There is no clear introduction to the essay, leaving with a series of cute kid pictures. Revisit your images and try to pull a little more depth from them.
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